WALT write a recount focussing on using adjectives and correct punctuation.
Watch the following video of an African safari African Safari.
Now imagine that you are on the safari and describe one of your days in detail. Write it like you did the chimpanzee in space recount.
Think about what you can see all the animals, what they look like in detail, how they smell and what they would feel like. The plants, how they feel, the temperature of the sun the dusty road. Then talk about the people that you meet.
I can’t wait to read your writing and picture in my mind what you see.
Start writing here……
Yesterday was the best day of my life. Because I went to the african safari. I saw jeff the elephant he was as fat as tree trunk and he is hairy as a hairy man. We saw a cheetah with dots and was as.
